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Monica, yes, I have probably removed all "name-dropping" references, APA guidelines suggest minimal to no footnotes, so they are only parenthetical and are removed. As I said, Tamara submitted the final submission you made. After Tamara, I take a round of editing and then the final edits are done by the publisher. I spend a lot of time thinking what is needed and what is not needed in articles and whether an article conforms to APA guidelines and to our internal MCA guidelines. Sincerely, Michael > Mike -- attached is the one I had to ccorrect and accept. I made 4 > corrections which otherwise would have effected the meaning. However I > did not want to mess with the rest of the text because of the the > english corrections Tamara already made. The attached file can be > compared to the one I mailed you yesterday (the final). I conclude, > for example, that footnotes are gone, a paragraph in the conclusion is > deleted, references have been removed, words have been replaced > (changes of english which I can't judge the correctness of). > > But, if an editor has worked with it I'll accept the changes though I > have to admit that I started to wonder whether the editor is a native > English speaker or not...? Nothing more I can do, I just hope > everything is ok. > > > > > > 3 dec 2009 kl. 03.43 skrev mike cole: > >> Michael is away for 6 weeks, but presumably online. i do not know >> what transformations happened between which step and which step. >> Tammy is not longer ucsd worker, Camille is. i will cc her and await >> news on what/how/ to proceed. >> >> Is there anything in what the current version you have before you >> that you object to, monica? >> mike >> >> On Wed, Dec 2, 2009 at 4:00 PM, Monica E. Nilsson >> <monica.e.nilsson@bth.se >> > wrote: >> Dear Michael -- I submitted the corrections but I am concerned >> because the edited article has major changes (removed parts and >> changed words) compared to the final version that Tamara worked on >> and, as I understand it, submitted to you. I would be pleased if you >> could make sure that it is the correct version that has been worked >> on by someone at the publisher (attached in this mail). Why are >> major parts removed and quite a lot of words changed since Tamara, a >> native english speaker and grad student in the USCD communication >> department, worked thoroughly with it? >> >> Again, my major concern is that the final and correct version has >> been mixed up with an old version... >> >> Looking forward to seeing the paper in print ;-) >> >> Thanks! >> >> Best regards/ >> Monica >> >> >> >> >> >> 16 sep 2009 kl. 22.48 skrev mroth@uvic.ca: >> >> 16-Sep-2009 >> >> Dear Monica Nilsson: >> >> 16-Sep-2009 >> >> It is a pleasure to accept your manuscript entitled "Creative >> Pedagogy of Play ? The Work of Gunilla Lindqvist" in its current >> form for publication in the Mind, Culture, and Activity: An >> International Journal. >> >> Final revised manuscripts are edited to improve the effectiveness of >> communication between author and readers. The most important goals >> are to improve sentence structure and to eliminate ambiguities. This >> pertains in particular to excessive and inappropriate use of >> references, footnoting, and parenthetical notes. When editing is >> extensive, with consequent danger of altered meaning, papers are >> returned by the journal Editor to the author for correction and >> approval before type is set. >> >> Thank you for your fine contribution. On behalf of the Editors of >> the Mind, Culture, and Activity: An International Journal, we look >> forward to your continued contributions to the Journal. >> >> Sincerely, >> Michael >> >> Wolff-Michael Roth >> Editor-in-Chief, Mind, Culture, and Activity: An International Journal >> mroth@uvic.ca, mroth@uvic.ca >> >> >> > > _______________________________________________ xmca mailing list xmca@weber.ucsd.edu http://dss.ucsd.edu/mailman/listinfo/xmca